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my new fursona i have a good feeling about him and as people may know i am obbsesed with :iconhinata661: characters so today i thought what would hinata661 do XD and i came up with him umm some people i showed ahead of time asked what i meant when i said judge me you see uhh well i believe in reincarnation but i also believe you spend a little time with god before you get your next life so i do believe in god but uhh yeah tada

char (c) me
inspiration (c) :iconhinata661:
tutorials (c) :iconlurker89:

Critiques


:iconhinata661:
First off, I love how you contrasted the colours together, they're wonderful choices and pleasing to the eye.

The markings are very original, but whichever tool that was used I think is a little overused in this picture. It'd be nice if there was a few that weren't blurred.

The anatomy is great, but the posture is a little awkward, seeing as unless sitting only on their back legs, canines can't have a straight back.

I love how you made the hair and head, the muzzle is in proper proportion and I love the blue nose. If the ears were curved slightly more though, they'd be more realistic for the picture. I like how they're differently coloured though.

The cheek could be a little rounder, too. It seems a bit pointy and triangular, I'd like to see improvement there, too.

Above all else, this is a great character.

--Reyah.
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:iconnaruhodou:
Let me start off by saying that this is a huge improvement from the last wolf you drew.

As for this one, I will say he is a tad bit tall, no?
Also, the leg that is raised is a bit too small. If it wasn't up in the air, it wouldn't reach the ground. Keep that in mind when you're drawing raised limbs.

You might want to puff the chest out a little more, too. He looks kind of flat, in my opinion.

The back legs, tail, and head are all wonderfully done. I don't see any problems with them at all.
You really did a great job with the colors, too.

Keep up the great work.

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Naruhodou.
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:iconhinata661:
xDD Cool lolz <33

I'm glad you find me inspiring, I like this charrie here <33


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R3D is blood...
BL00D is love...
L0V3 is death...
D3ATH is to truely be ALiiV3...

Icon by me, sankyuu vereh much.

BOW CHIKKA WOW WOW.M
:icon22980:
X3 and can i ask yous a favor

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You laugh at me because im different, but I laugh at you because you are the same.
:iconhinata661:
Sure :U

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R3D is blood...
BL00D is love...
L0V3 is death...
D3ATH is to truely be ALiiV3...

Icon by me, sankyuu vereh much.

BOW CHIKKA WOW WOW.M
:icon22980:
i know you want to draw tracker but could you draw him too

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You laugh at me because im different, but I laugh at you because you are the same.
:iconhinata661:
YES now I wana draw Blade instead xDD

I'll start n it as soon as I can, I'm gona put a lot of work into this <33


--
R3D is blood...
BL00D is love...
L0V3 is death...
D3ATH is to truely be ALiiV3...

Icon by me, sankyuu vereh much.

BOW CHIKKA WOW WOW.M
:icon22980:
okay X3

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You laugh at me because im different, but I laugh at you because you are the same.
:iconcomet-wolf:
Awsome job 8D I don't see anything to critique. I love the anatomy and colors <3

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If we were all followers, how would there be leaders?
:icon22980:
thanks :D i have been trying to practice realistic realism

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You laugh at me because im different, but I laugh at you because you are the same.
:icon22980:
i mean cartoonish realism

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You laugh at me because im different, but I laugh at you because you are the same.

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